Project 1 Red Chase Blue Feed back

Today’s tuition for the "30 sec practice animation/one week". Our Martin pointed that "in the shot 04,the running charactors locked in that shot".This situation breaked the attention of audience. and the action in shot 04 is shit! hahaha, yes ,I should make the movement more exaggerate to show the strong emotion and feeling in shot 04. and Martin pointed that "shot 05 is good contact with shot 06 with the color turnning ". I quit like shot 05 the fish eye,and shot 07 may add color on the character body .

 shot 04

shot 05

shot 05

shot 06

shot 06

                                       

Martin said the shot 08 need animate the foot , and the blue guy should not floating on the camera. the abstract door is a kind of confusion.I need more reference and research on Graphic design .in the end , shot 09 and shot 10 unfinished because the time no left.

shot 08

Above all, the project 1 is successful on those shots I focus on . and "What I gonna to do" is do more research on Graphic Aesthetics, Exaggerate figure movement,and the audience"feeling" , their emotion changing , and "attention" in storyboard design.

I will soon upload the project 1 Gif vision.